My paragraphs

Hi my friends.

Please forgive me for tardiness. I was on a trip so I couldn`t do up to date blog. But in this part I provide two paragraphs that I presented them at my class. Surely these paragraphs had some mistakes that my professor Mr. Ghoreishi corrected them. I wrote mistakes italic and corrected forms of them in parenthesis at follow.

First Paragraph

How Improve (to improve) Writing Skill

       English students need to improve writing skill. Writing skill helps you to connect other (to other) people around the world. I suggest several ways to improve your writing skill. First ways is copy a short passage from paper and write on scratch papers over and over formal (in formal) and informal situation (situations) and use a dictionary to check the meaning, pronunciation and spelling. Second way is Dictation Exercise. In this way you should get a friend to read out a text of newspaper or a magazine and you write then check your writing. Third way is so fun and useful – I use this way – Create a blog on the web. You create a blog in a blog provider such as www.blogspot.com and write a dairy about your life. The last way is find (to find) an E-pal. If your E-pal be native is so better. You can chat with your E-pal with using a messenger service like Yahoo or Google. Of course these ways improve your writing skill as an English student so much.

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Second Paragraph

Good Teacher

       Teacher is a person that teaches in a school or a collage. In my opinion a teacher should be so patient, because He or She will face with many different people in ages, cultures and behaviors. A good teacher who is that be intellect (intellectual) that could answer to the students’ (the students’) questions (Sure in His or Her field). Also a good teacher should be polite. I believe if a teacher treat good and politely surely He or She will treated good and politely and vice versa. Also if a teacher be (is) up to date and give to students new information will be likeable. So these features help a teacher will be effective and dear.

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In addition if you have similar paragraphs that think be useful please send to me that I use them in blog.

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